11 Terrible Ways to Start a Novel

Ever started writing your novel, only to hit a wall after the first few pages?

You’re not alone. The opening of your book is make-or-break—it’s what hooks readers or sends them running.

But here’s the truth: many authors unknowingly sabotage their stories from page one with common mistakes that instantly turn readers off.

In this video, I’m breaking down 11 terrible ways to start a novel—from overused clichés to confusing dream sequences and info dumps that bore readers before the story even begins. Learn how to avoid these pitfalls and craft an opening that grabs attention, keeps readers hooked, and sets your book apart.

If you want your novel to stand out in a crowded market, this is a must-watch. Don’t let your opening be the reason readers put your book down.

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Patrick ✌️